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         Breaths tumble softly
                            over scruffy bed sheets, an air
                              of sour milk

                  lingers
                                         just behind some numbered pages.


         Soluble colour, lion-like petals
                             swaying in temperate swings
                                of nostalgia;
           blue tac from a
                                                    paper box...




         Hair, and specs of sugar-coated skin, warm
                            and thicker than gold, when
               the

                                 limitless sound
                                      of erasing a mistake
               is the easy rush of
                                                   cool,
                                                                 chilly
                                                                               water.

         An eyelash in the sleeve of a jumper.


         Before letting freckles topple out onto the pillow,



                          take    something    in.
©2008-2009 *GoldenGirls
:icongoldengirls:

Author's Comments

Wrote this last night under the influence of amazing music. Sometimes I think it's better when you don't understand a language; there are no associations, just beautiful sounds with the best possible intentions. :heart: You never know where one word stops and another begins, it's all so beautiful!!! :D
I might not write again for a while, but I'm not going to try not to, or try to, I just don't think I will. I have a lot of books, and I'm sick of the sound of my own voice. :)

~enjoy.
xxxxxx

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:iconlonelyrider07:
awwwh but i'll miss reading them! :( books can really influence and inspire new works though and I know you'll cme up with something great in the end :heart:

this is soo descriptive its almost as if I can feel everything you're writing about :) i love it :heart: i know what you mean about listening to music in another language, it just sounds so much better when you don't understand it =D What were you listening to?
:iconberndi:
love books, i do. this is amazing. take something in, or take everything in?

--
~berndi

Clubs:

=sunsets
~big-cats-club
=Zoo-photographers
:icongohex:
Awesome word choice :) What were you listening to? Something foreign I assume or did your mind just wonder?

"swaying in temperate swings" = genius

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:icongoldengirls:
thank you very much :)
i'm listening to an Icelandic band called Sigur Ros :love:
aww, thank you :3
xxxxxx

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You fill your day, most of the time, by being in the washing machine of your own mind, thinking “what’s this, when does it stop, am I enjoying it, I don’t know, oh it’s time to go to sleep, I can’t, I’m worried.”
- Dylan Moran
:icongoldengirls:
thank you so much :heart: :)
take some things in :D
xxxxxx

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You fill your day, most of the time, by being in the washing machine of your own mind, thinking “what’s this, when does it stop, am I enjoying it, I don’t know, oh it’s time to go to sleep, I can’t, I’m worried.”
- Dylan Moran
:icongoldengirls:
thank you very much for the encouragement :D :heart:

i'm glad you like it :hug: thanks a bunch :)
i was listening to Sigur Ros, a band from Iceland :love:
xxxxxx

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You fill your day, most of the time, by being in the washing machine of your own mind, thinking “what’s this, when does it stop, am I enjoying it, I don’t know, oh it’s time to go to sleep, I can’t, I’m worried.”
- Dylan Moran
:iconlonelyrider07:
oh I think i've heard of that band but i've never listened to them :) Iceland would be soo neat. I listen to Tokio Hotel quite a bit, they're from Germany =D
:icongoldengirls:
if you can get hold of some of their music it would be extremely worth while :D
Tokio Hotel.. that rings some kind of a bell but i haven't listened to them XD i've listened to Ramstien from germany and i really don't like them, not that they're cousins or anything :XD:
xxxxxx

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You fill your day, most of the time, by being in the washing machine of your own mind, thinking “what’s this, when does it stop, am I enjoying it, I don’t know, oh it’s time to go to sleep, I can’t, I’m worried.”
- Dylan Moran
:iconlonelyrider07:
Yeah I'll definately look into them :) I'm curious to hear what a band from Iceland will sound like.
Tokio Hotel isn't like Ramstien at all..i'm not too fond of them either. They have an English album a well as a German one but I like the german versions better :) they're not so hardcore or anything but its a bit upbeat and they have some really nice slower songs. one song I would reccomend would be 'Through The Monsoon' if you're interested.

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